SciFi and Fantasy Art: The Sick Story: Page Fourteen

Alt for mye tekst men ellers veldig bra
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IV Skard replies: "Du har rett; du må henges! Jeg innså det ikke før litt senere; at det er for mye tekst på noen av disse første sidene. Dette er jeg nøye med på de følgende sidene. Ettersom folk er innstilt på å lese en tegneserie og ikke en bok, kan slike tekstsider få dem til å miste interessen..."

You have wonderful poses and movement! I'd like to draw one of your char's sometime....

IV Skard replies: "Thanks! I'm glad that you were happy with the Art trade!"

Nice action poses. Grrrrrl adventure! Fun! =)

IV Skard replies: "Thanks! Well it's a girl adventure indeed! I wonder what Tolkien would've said to that. He would've kicked my ass..."

Before I start doing what may sound like petty gripes. I really like the way Sick and the Horse are framed in the bottom corner and i love the silhouette. I also like that you moved the plot along fairly quickly to get to more interesting things than trying to convince the riders to loan a horse, but at the same time I think it was a little too quickly maybe. Also although I like having her on the horse in the bottom right and the thought bubbles fill a lot of space, some how it just looks to me like there is too much white on the bottom. It's kind of hard to change that but that's just what I think.

IV Skard replies: "I like the silhouette, but that's about it. In these early stages of the comic I did a lot of experimenting, and I regret putting in all that text. It scares readers away. After all; it's a comic, not a novel. I'm very careful with that later on, that is, where I'm at now."